Score: 7

"A Good Start!"

submission: I kissed a girl

date: July 16, 2009

This animation was unexpected - The voices were good, the animation was decent, and the idea is both original and funny.

It's a pity that this isn't finished - I will look out for it when you eventually do finish it, which I really hope you do.

Congratulations on a good start to a Flash, and I'm looking forward to the finished product!

Score: 6

"Not bad at all!"

submission: Help the Robot

date: July 16, 2009

This kind of game is not a new concept by any means, but you created a simple, decent-looking game that works, so well done!

Things that could be improved - Either up the robot's movement speed or slow the balls down a bit - the robot struggles to be able to hit all of the balls coming down.

Further enhancements - maybe some sound, different kinds of objects that do different levels of damage, and possibly weapon upgrades.

But on the whole, a decent attempt - well done!

Score: 7

"Good flash!"

submission: Zolaft!

date: June 12, 2009

This was a surprisingly good flash - nice animation, good quality sound, all round a good parody of medicinal adverts!

Just one thing - the medicine you're talking about is spelled Zoloft.

Other than that, well done!

Score: 8

"Very Nice!"

submission: Wallace & Gromit: Top Bun

date: December 17, 2008

Congratulations on a fun little game!

The graphics were very smooth, the gameplay was easy to pick up, and the game was fun to play the first and second time, but it began to lose its sparkle by the end, as it became repetitive.

The comments from Wallace were funny, as they always are, and the sound was good on the whole.

Long Live Wallace and Grommit!

Score: 10

"Fantastic brawler!"

submission: Red Baron

date: December 12, 2008

This is honestly one of my favourite games on Newgrounds.

The gameplay is slick and simple, and the graphics are great.
The sound is well-synched, and very appropriate.
The best part of this flash is the concept - a brawler where the protaganist is high on shrooms - outrageous and funny!

Congratulations on a truly fantastic game!

Score: 7

"Interestingly good!"

submission: Cable Miner

date: December 12, 2008

The graphics were good, and the gameplay quite smooth and easy, which was refreshing to see in a new entry.

One thing - you should give the player a second or two to react to the start of a level - the first couple of tries you simply see the miner fall unless you do what you advised and hold the space bar down.

Apart from that, a great Flash - congratulations!

Score: 5

"Basic does not cover the unimpressiveness of this"

submission: -Invasion Game-

date: November 23, 2008

Although the flight of the enemies and plane were well-animated, there were few, if any, other good points. You could not identify which powerup was going to happen - all you see is the single powerup symbol - try having one for each powerup.

Also, the background masks some of the enemy's shots, which makes it more difficult to dodge.

Despite all of this criticism, there are worse games out there, and this flash does have potential, so keep working on it, and I look forward to seeing improvements.

Score: 6

"Not bad!"

submission: Car Destruction Race

date: November 23, 2008

The first thng I noticed was the logical main menu, which is sometimes lacking in this sort of games, which made me optimistic about the game.

I was sadly disappointed by the inaccurate car animations, and the repetitive engine sound.

But apart from that, this isn't a bad effort, although there is much room for improvement.

Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: the greatest animation!!

date: November 23, 2008

Not a bad start!

The animation was slickish, and the music, while a little irritating, was
well-integrated.

One suggestion - spread the animation out a bit. I liked the creation of the character from a line, but the gun appearing and shooting the man happened too fast to process completely the first time.

Other than that, well done, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

Score: 7

"Very good start!"

submission: Evolution Flash Style

date: November 23, 2008

Congratulations on a high-quality first flash animation!

The animation of all of the changes (such as trees growing etc.) was very sleek, the music synchronised well, and there were some surprises :)

Only one criticsm - work a little on your Engilsh...your spelling was suspect at times.

Other than that, well done, and keep up the good work!